Sunday, June 15, 2014

Here, I will give the first available quote: - What


Let's start with the fact that I chose this cover is not accidental. First of all, I love these things - it looks stylish. But the main thing here - postscript "For fans of The Hunger Games." Remember. Prior to that, we get later.
I love dystopia really like. Watch movies, "swallow" books per day. This topic is close to me and interesting. So when I learned about running - just decided to read it. But I did not expect tv shop ...
From the first page I realized that reading for me is not easy. Before reading "Perfume", rich in complex and heavy descriptions, slow plot and strange emotions, I thought that the typical teenage book will give me easy - but it was not there!
The book is written badly. I barely finished reading to the end. Genre, which under normal circumstances is easy to read, simply drove me into a stupor. I had to re-read paragraphs to make sense of what is happening and at least a little tv shop to imagine what was happening. In "Runner" absolutely no descriptions, author uses almost no complex sentences. Text odnoslozhen and Presa, is incredibly difficult to read because Deshner periodically failed ligaments and loses logic.
When I talk about the lack of descriptions, I'm not kidding and do not exaggerate. The worst thing is when in other situations it is possible to shift the blame to the language barrier (different languages - different understanding) then do not do so. I specifically looked at the original and it is no different from the translation. tv shop
Deshner writes simple, almost tv shop too simple. Instead, for example, "concrete wall was high and probably the height of five-story building. Ivy covered her so that she seemed to be woven from plants, moss at the foot creating a feeling that the grass began to grow vertically on the wall. "The author writes," Thomas went to the wall. It was concrete and high. " (I know that my example is not the best, but I'm not a writer or write a best-seller.) It's incredibly tedious and lulling. Characters, by the way, spelled the same way. Moreover, we do not know about the main character is nothing but his name and approximate age, although the author is a third-person narration (even in the GOP, where first we knew about the appearance of the main character more than here), and other characters spelled tv shop as "He was black," "He was small and kind of twelve years," and "She was beautiful, her blue eyes he liked." And this is not the case when the author leaves room for the imagination of the reader, this is the case when the reader begins to wonder, "Do all have the character look?".
And so described not only the appearance. Characters are not used at all. They do not just not spelled out, they are hardly mentioned. Blame it on the fact that young people do not remember their past should not - each has its own personality, which can not be limited to the concepts of "bad" and "good." But not here. Deshner narrates in the third person, whose position allows to survey all the characters with beautiful and interesting life, but he is focused solely on the main character tv shop literally pursues his heels, only expressing his point of view, and half of the first part of the book consists of all thoughts of Thomas. Then why write in the third person? I do not understand.
Dialogues written disgusting. Many of them have no sense. Remembered "Sting-up", only here there was a bet on the high moral dialogues, tv shop though and simulated. Here we will have a completely inappropriate bytovuha with repeated remarks that factitious even more than in the aforementioned film.
Here, I will give the first available quote: - What's going on? - He asked, pointing at the building. - I do not know - the fat man said. His voice was still childish thin. - Ben There, quite bad. They took it. - They? - Thomas did not like sounded tv shop ominously in the mouths of the word boy. - Yeah. - Who is it - are they? - Say thank you, if at all, never know - quite nonchalantly that it is at least strange in such circumstances, the boy said, extending his hand. - My name is Chuck. I had a pot before you came here. (....) - You're hiding something tv shop - he said finally disposing of the apple and taking a long drink of water. His increasingly annoyed that his questions tv shop stubbornly respond. But even if he got the answers, how would he know the truth if he say? - Why do you let in so much fog? - Just because it's all arranged. There a lot of things strange, and most of us know very little. Well, maybe only half of the total. - Good. Nobody told me I could not look around a bit. - He needs to find out something, or he would go mad. - Hey, hey, wait! - Chuck shouted, start after him. - Beware, the baby is about to be closed! -

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